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Brooke Steele,
I have to agree with you. All that noise, all the dying and injured screaming for their mommas, the smell of blood and other body odors would have pulled the creatures in like sharks to chum. Critique done, it helped move the story forward.. so let me throw this opposite theory out there: The jars brought them in at full strength because they'd already become familiar with THEIR collective scent. Maybe it overrode any sense of self preservation.
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