I took the time to read through the first 8 pages and pretty much all of things I thought of were discussed. A few things to add.

I'm really not sure what CJ was doing with the undressing thing. It does seem totally out of her character, maybe she is really trying to let Saul know.

Isn't there some kind of water shortage at the Colony right now? I thought I remember Lizzie saying something about rationing.

I definitely think the Katana blade got stuck in the bone because the bones were stronger than normal. Which is interesting because it was just a normal walker right?

I loved how Victor was all playing off like he was dope at Soccer and later on when they played Saul was better at it than him. HAHA! Great DUO. Their dialogue and bromance is the best I've ever seen.

CJ is so rad. I've loved her since we first met her. It's looking doubtful that she is SWAT now. What SWAT member would only have a Katana sword in their apartment? Maybe one that specializes in planning or something but that still seems like a strange weapon to keep around as your only defense.