Tales from We're Alive: Lockdown

**Gooer** · Mar 20th, 2015, 01:42 AM

Originally Posted by Litmaster

YOU MEAN IT'S GOING TO SUCK?!??

#Shotsfired

**Litmaster** · Mar 20th, 2015, 03:07 AM

Originally Posted by Gooer

#Shotsfired

No, that was a compliment!

**Gooer** · Mar 20th, 2015, 05:03 AM

Originally Posted by Litmaster

No, that was a compliment!

Sure sure, i believe.....

P.S. Your sig is kinda saddening.....

Kc · Mar 20th, 2015, 05:55 AM

Originally Posted by Gooer

I did see that...

Some damn good work from him, have to admit.

But, on here he's called it TFWA, and on Facebook he called it TOWA....

WHICH ONE IS IT, I NEED TO KNOW

Originally Posted by Litmaster

YOU MEAN IT'S GOING TO SUCK?!??

It's a possibility that some people won't like it, but that goes with everything.

Mini update, draft 2 is 107 pages in of the now 300. These things usually get longer rather than shorter, at least my writing does.

There was also one scene added in near the end. Do you have any idea what that is, no... but it's pretty cool. It was something I wanted to put in but struggled to find a place but finally found it. I hope it still works once I get into the 2nd draft.

**Litmaster** · Mar 20th, 2015, 08:31 AM

Originally Posted by Kc

It's a possibility that some people won't like it, but that goes with everything.

I wonder if you'll get more flack from people given that this will be a purchased product rather than free. You know, us assholes like to feel like we're getting our $$$ worth...

Originally Posted by Kc

Mini update, draft 2 is 107 pages in of the now 300. These things usually get longer rather than shorter, at least my writing does.

Do you find that your drafts follow the general '1 minute per page' standard, or is that an old, OTR bullshit standard?

If you ever sold WA as a television series and were commissioned as lead writer, would you have trouble re-formatting the show to fit the more rigid tv specs (for ads, etc)?

Also, in the original WA, you made some effort to create mini-arcs within the seasons and even within each episode, so as to carry forward momentum in the series. Are you thinking of TFWA as more of a mini-series with a similar approach to arcs, or rather as one long movie with one big arc? Does this thinking affect how you want to split up the 5 hours, if at all?

Originally Posted by Kc

There was also one scene added in near the end. Do you have any idea what that is, no... but it's pretty cool. It was something I wanted to put in but struggled to find a place but finally found it. I hope it still works once I get into the 2nd draft.

Hmmm... cool. I'm wondering whether the additional information we will get from the jail will do more to answer some lingering questions for us, or raise more questions than answers...

**Gooer** · Mar 20th, 2015, 04:37 PM

Originally Posted by Litmaster

Hmmm... cool. I'm wondering whether the additional information we will get from the jail will do more to answer some lingering questions for us, or raise more questions than answers...

C'mon Lit, it's Kc: he answers every question with about 5 more questions.....