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    To Yarri: At Chapter 24, 21:46 Burt couldn't be the second prisoner because he has not been captured at this point. "some teenage girl " is pretty non descript? Wouldn't Durai know about Kalani and his efforts as a spy? Would Durai know who his daughter was? Maybe, maybe not, but if he did know it was Kalani's daughter I think Durai would have refered to her that way; instead of "some teenage girl".
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