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    Second pass pick-ups... minutiae? All right, I have my notes from my recent listen through. I missed this thread when it first went up, but I'm here now.

    Sergeant Michael Cross got promoted after getting to Ft. Irwin:
    His wiki lists his rank as SGT/E-5 and way back in Ch. 3 (3/3 @ 21:21) When he meets Burt for the first time, he addresses Michael as "Buck Sergeant." Buck Sergeant is a sometimes derogatory, sometimes term of endearment for E-5's. Much later in Ch. 33, (1/3 @ 24:09) he calls Carl and identifies himself as Staff Sergeant, an E-6.

    When CPL Puck is being a jerk, he isn't that big of a jerk:
    When correcting a newbie he says "Out falcon standing." (CH. 33 1/3 @ 4:25)
    (Bonus points if you know why I highlighted it in blue.)

    Early signs of the Inklings/ADLO's/Numbered Ones:
    In Ch. 10 (1/3 @ 6:24) was that squeaking glass or whining?

    More talking zombies:
    From Lizzy's audio journal... after she gets dragged out of the truck and the recording trails off, you can hear something say "Go" or "No."
    Last edited by Red Shirt; Nov 11th, 2013 at 01:05 PM.
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    Hey, get a load of this. Guess who started writing again and has a spot in the fan fiction subforum?


 

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