I submitted very rough, very unthought through versions of this story. I have numerous chapters of a now better written story, and many of the changes are made in the first two chapters. I will be reposting them for the sake of the stories. Also, my writing has improved since then, so I think it will help everyone. After I have the late Osiris—to those of you who remember him—edit the current version one more time, I will be putting them up. And I will attempt to do it at more regular intervals.

Thanks,

Creemy