Chapter 45 Remastering Thread

[Kc]

Chapter 45 Remastering Thread

[LiamKerrington]

Hello everyone,

let's get real:

05:31 - the piece dropping to the ground (or wherever) seems to be kind of very loud; less would do it
10:58 - Riley says: "for once"
11:27 - Riley says: "for once" - both quotes make sense. But it feels kind of odd that this "phrasing" occurs twice within half a minute.
12:47 - 13:10 - Burt mentions "just one person in the car"; and then he only speaks about "them" or "they" ... Riley speaks of "they" first as well until she recognizes he is a man
21:30- - 21:39 - 8-9 seconds of silence is kind of "long" between both scenes, but not disturbingly long ...
31:29 - 31:40 - what is that "noise" or "sound", which seems to resemble some "weird suppressed whimpering"
31:52 - Saul "gurgles"
32:45 - Saul interrupts Victor; but the interrupt seems to lack "the right start"; it's some like something from the start is cut off

That'a about it ...
Best wishes!
Liam

[Kc]

Hello everyone,

let's get real:

05:31 - the piece dropping to the ground (or wherever) seems to be kind of very loud; less would do it
10:58 - Riley says: "for once"
11:27 - Riley says: "for once" - both quotes make sense. But it feels kind of odd that this "phrasing" occurs twice within half a minute.
12:47 - 13:10 - Burt mentions "just one person in the car"; and then he only speaks about "them" or "they" ... Riley speaks of "they" first as well until she recognizes he is a man
21:30- - 21:39 - 8-9 seconds of silence is kind of "long" between both scenes, but not disturbingly long ...
31:29 - 31:40 - what is that "noise" or "sound", which seems to resemble some "weird suppressed whimpering"
31:52 - Saul "gurgles"
32:45 - Saul interrupts Victor; but the interrupt seems to lack "the right start"; it's some like something from the start is cut off

That'a about it ...
Best wishes!
Liam

Cant fix the for once... but I noted it for any future versions.

"12:47 - 13:10 - Burt mentions "just one person in the car"; and then he only speaks about "them" or "they" ... Riley speaks of "they" first as well until she recognizes he is a man"
That's an american slang thing.

"31:29 - 31:40 - what is that "noise" or "sound", which seems to resemble some "weird suppressed whimpering"
Lady, the dog.

"32:45 - Saul interrupts Victor; but the interrupt seems to lack "the right start"; it's some like something from the start is cut off"

Wasn't able to move the start point. You lose what Saul says too much to understand.


Good notes! Thanks.

[raymoney]

Hello
Yeah at 31:29-31:37 it sounds like a wierd low buzzing with wimpering.

At 1:02:40-1:03:11 the bent ladder sounds a little louder than I'd expect.

On the for once part if it could be dropped from the second sentence I think the sentence would still make sense.

I think that's it.
Thankyou! Raymoney

[airrunner]

Listened to this Chapter twice through. I can't just listen once, because I end up being enthralled by the story again and forget to pay close attention to the audio. I didn't notice any problems with this Chapter. It all sounded fine to me. Nice job again! A lot happened in this one chapter. I had forgotten how packed with story lines you made each chapter of Season Four.

[Kc]

Changes applied. There was no way to change "For once" this go around.