The Lit-Treatise on Ch. 30-1, pt. 1
On Time Travel
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Originally Posted by
nikvoodoo
So that was a healthy leap forward in the chronology wasn't it?
Yes, Nick, it certainly was. I was a bit disappointed by the big jump in time, but it does make sense from a narrational perspective (and yes, I just coined a new word, Osiris, so put your grammarian referee whistle back in your pocket!). With the time jump, we get to now skip over a lot of the tedious revelatory material, such as:
- Vic/Saul/CJ long conversations about their past histories and what happened up until this point
- CJ getting the new guys acclimated to her resources at Dunbar and all the satellite farms / coops / safe houses
- Riley's inital training on how to be a soldier at Irwin
- Lots of boring missions of Vic/Saul running errands
- All the introductory crap with Datu and the gang over at Boulder
Of course, we also totally miss out on what is happening with Burt, who has probably been tortured 8 ways from Sunday by now... [and Kc, a perfect element to advance the plot at this point would be to have an episode where Burt manages to escape from the Mallers, eventually to stagger all the way back to rejoin Vic/Saul/CJ and give them crucial intel on the location of the Mallers and Lizzy. Write it up, dude... you can thank me later :cool:]
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Originally Posted by
wh33t
I've been really hoping there will be some intensity in the next few chapters.
Generally, the long period of time a story covers, the slower the pace, so it is good that Kc skips us ahead to the good bits. Do you really want 20 minutes of Michael summarizing all the new procedures and crap he has learned of since coming to Irwin?