hey, what do you think of The Survivor? give it to me straight, bad, good, indifferent, if you've had time to read it.
just consider me like an editor
you would do that? wow.. Reaper thank you.
it's fine, i'll ask some folks what they think, get a second opinion, and see where some minor tweaks could potentially be made to make it work.
I know your not. Its just making it hard to really see any reason to finish the story as its so inaccurate at this point.
btw, i'm not petitioning you to make changes, you write your story however best suits you, i'm just giving you some insight into club life and politics.
no, i spend too much time around real mc's and real outlaws. as far as making assumptions, there is only a certain caliber of person who join mc's, i know this from haveing met a lot of people in mc's and a lot of people who weren't but rode. it's real simple, you get burned like that, you cut slingload. if the rest of the club doesn't agree with the decision, they vote you back in, but this undermines the presidents authority, and he can no longer be an effect leader and they hold a vote of no confidence. and no woman is going to hold anything over the president and make him change his decision. he may listen to her suggestions, but the authority is his and he won't let anyone forget it. that includes daughters. women don't have a vote, or any real say in club business, they just have to do what they're told.
That implies you know Gage. your speculating. The club is home the members family . Gage got a raw deal and all of them knew it. LOL and you watch too much SOA.. Its my story and it stands as it is . Gage was kept on the fringe but he got back his "uncles" aka his dead father's friends.
yes, but getting the boot is a major thing and could seriously kill any desire he might have to be in the club under a prez like that. on the other hand, if he really loved it, he would be in it all the way. you can't be half in half out, especially if they're outlaw.
Never said he didn't "feel it" He grew up in it. It was his family. He hooked up with Cassie her crazy father who was the prez of the mc had issues with it and kicked him out. (Gage wanted to be there.. Sam her father didn't.. want him in it or near his daughter..) did you read any of my posts o_0 on Cassie's backstory?
