No not at all it was like intense. I loved it
it wasn't too much was it?
it was a holy crap moment for me. wow very visual very very visual
yeah, i was going for graphic shock value, but not for shock values sake. not just as a kind of "f u" but more of a way to jolt the reader totally from one end of the spectrum to the other. a complete and sudden shift from the established norm.
wow.. chapter 3 is intense. Sorry its taken me a while to respond to it. I've been ill for the last few weeks.
*pokes*..
You???!!!?!?!?
I think this combat is working good
cool
I'm glad you asked me. I'll let you know soon.
