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  1. gugyhodge's Avatar
    good job
  2. seoagencyindia's Avatar
    thank you for sharing this.
  3. Nannie's Avatar
    Does anyone else read this in Michael's voice?
  4. tionis's Avatar
    thanks for the feedback
  5. Vlarken's Avatar
    This is a cool idea... However, you changed verb tense in the middle of the story, if I'm not mistaken. I, honestly, would prefer it to be written in past tense. It definitely needs some work, but still a pretty cool idea.
  6. tionis's Avatar
    Quote Originally Posted by Gooer
    Hmm, interesting idea.....
    I know right
  7. Gooer's Avatar
    Hmm, interesting idea.....