good job
thank you for sharing this.
Does anyone else read this in Michael's voice?
thanks for the feedback
This is a cool idea... However, you changed verb tense in the middle of the story, if I'm not mistaken. I, honestly, would prefer it to be written in past tense. It definitely needs some work, but still a pretty cool idea.
Originally Posted by Gooer Hmm, interesting idea..... I know right
Hmm, interesting idea.....